WAR

L.G create a mood of fear/ horror

S.O.S language  that creates fear

-adjectives/ nouns

-see/hear

Dear mum and dad

As I get out of the boats I fall into the painful freezing, cold water, me and heavy  bag pack finally get to shore  I throw my heavy bag in the trench ,I look over and my mate Paul is lieing on the  ground with blood everywhere I screamed HELP! I stand there  horrified .

I hear the germans sneaking up behind me I run through  all the smelly bloody dead bodies I hear soldiers screaming there death . Suddenly a bullet just misses my leg. I see more and more people  dieing from Switzerland.

Love Lukah