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Stratford primary school Italian meatballers cooked up some yummy meals

On monday the 11th of september stratford primary school year ⅚   cooked some delicious meals from other countries . Room6 went first  and made decorations out of paper and cardboard .For 8 weeks  room 6 we're   working on budgets, flyes , menus tickets and grocery lists. The Italian meatballers traditional food. For there Entree they had Garlic bread with cheese sprinkled on top .For there main they had spaghetti and meatballs with cheese sprinkled on top of the meatballs . For there dessert they had napoleon ice cream  with chocolate sauce and sprinkled flake on the sauce .The waiters ask what flavor drink do you want there is coke,raspberry and lemonade . THE service and giving was extremely slow . I pocked  my head in the kitchen and everything looks  great  and everyone was helping plate up . everyone was saying positive comments .

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